kiss ready lips
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- sothere
Just been working on this brand. let me know what you think.
- sem0
looks good
- MrAbominable0
when you say "brand" what do you mean? color, site and targeting all seem good. logotype is a bit of a mess.
- cruddlebub0
looks good! is it better than leading brands? my lady goes through tins of this stuff... and i always get her ton of it for christmas in her stocking!
- this is a real good product. way better than the leading brands. no chemicals all natural. uses chia oil so good for you too.
sothere
- this is a real good product. way better than the leading brands. no chemicals all natural. uses chia oil so good for you too.
- organicgrid0
- clients wish. but good point.
sothere - align them pleaseProjectile
- clients wish. but good point.
- omahadesigns0
The logotype could use some kerning fixing and it doesn't really look vertically centered in that circle.
I like that the K and R kiss each other, but it could be more fun.
- sothere0
Thanks for the comments guys. Appreciate the feedback.
- uan0
the linked logo to home when in home doesn't make sense...nor the linked home button when in home. maybe just details, but things like that bother me.
besides that, the design looks really good, I would revise some alignments like the cart and contact us.
and what also catches my eye is the difference in image quality through the pictures, I like the noisy one at top in contrast to the 3 in the slide show, but 1 of them is so low-res that it bothers a bit.
- HAYZ1LLLA0
The first 'kiss ready' image in the slide show I don't like either. Nice job though.
- Projectile0
Customise the logotype more. It looks like you typed it and moved the letters around. Play with line weight etc too