Portfolio Crit
Portfolio Crit
Out of context: Reply #18
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- jysta0
>>> Please take this as constructive criticism, overall the site works nice but:
Your intro para left me with more questions then answers:
'user advocate' - advocate of what exactly?
IMO never user the word 'geek.' What have bikes got to do with your site or work? What is a media center? ...I like the type your using for the intro para and logo but the type on the side bar needs to be much less fussy. Try Helvetica, DIN, DIN condensed, Akkurat. Keep the type simple or the same serif but much smaller. (The size is too similar to the logo).
I would say the Visual Design section is your strongest. And so would suggest making the thumbnails on the page a lot bigger or having them run in the same way as the Branding section (1 at a time)