Sacramento Mardi Gras (feedback requested)
Sacramento Mardi Gras (feedback requested)
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My big hangup outside the other issues brought up (all legit) is the choice and treatment of the type. It doesn’t seem to fit, and it’s just typed in and left alone. This needs attention. And you have the important type as white on mustard, which isn’t really doing it any favors. I recommend rethinking some of these choices.