Sacramento Mardi Gras (feedback requested)
Sacramento Mardi Gras (feedback requested)
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- sarahfailin1
here it is with a little more adjusting and black text instead of white...
- i killed the underline already. you really hate the trees in the top right??sarahfailin
- i kind of want the trees to become our insignia, but not sure how to use them.sarahfailin
- Chainsaw noises and lower third text center aligned. Or if you are committed to the left margin, up the font size, lose the "and downtown"garbage
- and the "FIND OUT MORE"garbage
- DATE
OLD SACRAMENTO
WEBSITEgarbage - Maximize that space, imho.garbage
- Garbage is right, be concise. I own this poster IRL. Notice at the bottom how it's http://i.pinimg.com/…cherub
- just "Music hall of Williamsburg" and the date (and the other band name) And in teeny type and the very bottom a URL. Short, and to the point.cherub
- i'll play with the alignment some. ... still debating on the trees ToT i like them!
thank you garbage!sarahfailin - You could even be trendy and write your date as: 2.26.2022cherub
- I don't hate the trees in the headline, but the type choice is odd and if u do keep the trees, you'll need to scale them down or u can't center ur headline.cherub
- Trees are already in the illustration. Growing out of her hand.monospaced
- Duplicating them smaller a couple inches away is weird. And it’s not your logo.monospaced
- "Growing out of her hand" lolololol I noticed that toocherub