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i barely made out the serif and notch till you mentioned it
1st one looks fine
all i can see in the other 2 is they look like something went wonky in that corner
WTF is it?
zoom out x25%... you're working too small.
I look at the first one and it just seems to end, I don't know. sleep deprivation is my excuse so you guys have to think for me.
the notch and serif are worthless that small. its certainly abstract, reminds me of a racing logo for some reason.
punch a little hole in the top right corner, maybe, keeping it in line with the partial circle cut out at the bottom
i don't mind the "serif" / tail on the end of the 2nd one, but seriously if this is a logo it's gotta be at least 400% bigger to even be a consideration.
I'm not feeling it
What the crap is it?
like it better with the serif, but not sure about the gradient
I get the concept, but don't like the execution. I think it's too stark a difference between skinny to fat with the big cutout. And too subtle with the serif/notch part.
what is it?
going no where, start again
to abstract. you could do so much better things with d+j
Could you do me a favor and outline the D and J for me, so I know where I'm looking. Maybe it's like one of those posters you used to have to blur your eyes to see the shapes or sailboat whatever.
looks like a cock with the ballz knocked out