personal logo crit
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- yeeblazer0
The serrif/notch are too small and almost look like a mistake...but I agree with some of the other comments that this is too abstract...I had no idea what i was looking at - i get the "d" part but the J needs more legibility
- Nairn0
Save it as a WMF.
- brandelec0
i barely made out the serif and notch till you mentioned it
- longtongued_liar0
1st one looks fine
all i can see in the other 2 is they look like something went wonky in that corner
- i_monk0
I look at the first one and it just seems to end, I don't know. sleep deprivation is my excuse so you guys have to think for me.
- timfraserbrown0
irrelevant
- svenreed0
the notch and serif are worthless that small. its certainly abstract, reminds me of a racing logo for some reason.
- monospaced0
punch a little hole in the top right corner, maybe, keeping it in line with the partial circle cut out at the bottom
- horton0
i don't mind the "serif" / tail on the end of the 2nd one, but seriously if this is a logo it's gotta be at least 400% bigger to even be a consideration.
- thompson0
history shows that if you start a thread called "logo crit" your so-called logo sucks and you should start again.
- Llyod0
I'm not feeling it
- good, Llyod, because that would be "bad touch"longtongued_liar
- Complexfruit0
I get the concept, but don't like the execution. I think it's too stark a difference between skinny to fat with the big cutout. And too subtle with the serif/notch part.
- skt0
what is it?
- D + JComplexfruit
- can't see it even when i have been told.skt
- i am with skt....Mishga
- typist0
going no where, start again
- moamoa0
to abstract. you could do so much better things with d+j