flame my logo

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  • Amicus0

    Love the overall direction of this. What's the context?

    The G doesn't fit with the rest so well. The 's' is looking better but maybe too tall. The 'r' needs to sit on the baseline like the original.

    'el' looks too much like 'ef' and the '80|81' is too small. I agree with those who say you need to delete the 'G' and 'o' drop shadow thingamajig.

    I love the style of the 'm' swash and maybe you could tweak it slightly and use a similar style of curve for the other swashes. I think its the more abrupt turns and the come and go I'm liking.

  • Miguex0

    Yeah, I think its necessary to know context before doing any statements. I'm going to assume this is for a pub just buy looking at it. If so, you nailed it.

    Context will give us a better idea of how this will be used, for example, this logo might look great big, but in smaller sizes the numbers and the "el" look like might be hard to read.