Layout Crit
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- cubanhaze
http://www.cubanhaze.com/upload/…
Any comments apreciated. thx
- abizzyman0
the arrows are a little 'done'... and are kinda annoying as they're not centered up... which could be good as my attention was drawn to the big one up top.
... which I really don't like. :) The main arrow next to the site name is really big and annoying.
The rest is very nice and clean - easy on the eyes. I like.
- fate0
waaay too much variation in font size and type dude, consolidate that stuff. Has a lot of potential though,
- fate0
from my eye I can see about 6-7 variations in size, and maybe 4-5 different fonts or variants of fonts.
- blaw0
agreed with the multiple fonts/sizes/cases issue.
clean that up and it will go a long way toward make that a good design.
- Beech0
looks good, I agree it's got potential, look at the typography as said, also i think its a bit grey, your work looks colourful and cool but the site looks kinda military. but thats just my opinion.
keep up the good stuff.
- cubanhaze0
Thanx a lot for the constructive crit. i agree w/ what u guys say...
Started up with less fonts and sizes, but i guess i went kinda crazy, also with the big arrow and all.
About the color, im planning on using very differnt color schemes to choos from.
thx again, keep it comin
- jarredbishop0
lose the arrows dude... but the rest is sweet!
- cubanhaze0
bump
- fate0
have you updated it? Because there isn't much more to say than has been said. Maybe when you flesh it out some more we can give more advice.
- Chimp0
the only thing I can add to the above comments is your work may be a small. Perhaps you could click on it and it opens up in a bigger window. Well Thats if your show print work. All teh rest is dope. Good stuff!
- cubanhaze0
updated
- cubanhaze0
http://www.cubanhaze.com/upload/…
changed the DIN to Helv.
- waynepixel0
I like it. Sort-out the font size issue and you have a good design.
- armed_rob0
I like it!
Small details:
· The "12345" needs some alignment to the picture
· I dont know about the "." before "Menu + Information + Display"
· Whats up with the "v" in the buttom
Nice work!
- cubanhaze0
thx for all the comments
Armed_rob, which "v" are u talkin about?
thx
- rasp0
quite nice
id lose the bullets though - theyre not needed
id also left align the type on the right hand side too
- armed_rob0
black "v" in the html.
- blaw0
eyes like a hawk there armed_rob.
- brtman0
he had a keyboard shortcut mismatch trying to move the picture on the canvas...
- DutchBoy0
"play movie" & "12345" & "client" aren't aligned that well imho..