< era//404 Flash Reel
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- era404
I'd love feedback if anyone has a moment.
- davi-t0
hey man, I'm in the middle of doin mine. :)
Looks good but a few things:
- Get rid of the crazy mask transition in the beginning when your hear the record scratch. It makes it look cheezy. The beginning of this thing should be kick ass and want to make ppl interested in watching more. I*'d get rid of the music switch altogether actually along with the record scratch, scratch doesnt go with the music.
- Get some close ups in on some of those designs! U've got some niice work, so let ppl see it.
- Fade in logo in beginning.
- Some of ur pieces are up for too long and the screen doesn't change much. Cut to a different view or piece. If there's a beat going on in the background, change the screen with it.
A finally, 34 megs is supa large for a reel this size. Use Sorenson Squueze to shrink it. It shouldnt be more than 15 megs.
Go here for some 'reel' influence>
http://justincone.com/tween/
- JamesEStone0
Really impressive! Good stuff... you could take it another level by putting it into flash and bringing images / info up in context
- KILLputer0
feedback:
34MB is too big.
- era4040
Thanks for the great advice, guys!
- e-pill0
your work is real tight!!!!
what program did you use to compile it all together?
fashion design is so boring compared to that.
im in the wrong industry!!!
kick ass!!!
:)
- era4040
thanks e.
The work is Flash/HTML.
The 3D is 3DS Max.
The editing was done in AfterEffects and Premiere.