logo critique?
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- fodcj
I have just finished the design for a new logo and would appreciate you comments. The image shows 3 different versions but these could be changes if need be.
Thanks for your help:
[URL=http://imageshack.us?s=1][I...
- hoopy0
fouty?
- fodcj0
- GOT to change this
doesn't work...at all
Break the U away from inpired..that is terriblemarychain - I meant..the name is terribel
like the terribly unfortunate
www.expertsexchange...
or www.speedofart.commarychain
- GOT to change this
- akrokdesign0
qbn top tip ---> do a copy img. and then paste it. ( the image )
- kelpie0
A. what is it for? it can't be critiqued without knowing the context.
B. Lose the gradients, please. P lease.
- akrokdesign0
allright, it works now.
- fodcj0
It is for a gallery website that is being developed as we speak. Basically where people can come and get inspiration etc.
- paraselene0
unfortunate name. no matter what you do, it's always going to read 'uninspired'.
- Was a little worried about that but thought that if the U was pulled out in some way it wouldn't read like that...fodcj
- yup, thought so tookelpie
- yep.akrokdesign
- second that. though perhaps it's because i'm feeling uninspired today myself.jar
- +! multiAdd, parallel agreement module activated, temper bit string, modulate profanity engine - ENGAGE.detritus
- I read it as uninspired as well. Crappy name.eegrek
- drgs0
not sure about using U for "you"
sort of reads areUninspired, took me seconds to sort out what is says
- akrokdesign0
that light bulb are not working. the star make it look broken. and the angel of the screwing, looks funky. I would made them straight.
yeah, dont like the gradients either. it doesn't do anything. loose it.
- The idea of the light bulb was to signify a flash of inspiration...fodcj
- kelpie0
"the angel of the screwing"
I've known a few of them.
- LOL! i bet you do. thats an other topic doh. haha.akrokdesign
- hahah.skt
- hee!paraselene
- uncle_helv0
Looks cheap, and I agree with drgs kind of reads uninspired, plus the use of 'U instead of you' and '2 instead of to' or '4 instead of for' annoys the f*ck out of me, it's lazy and reminds me of local plumbers or carpet fitters or some white van set up.
- amen.paraselene
- stick it 2 him helv.skt
- sorry should have included paraselene on the reference to Uninspireduncle_helv
- fodcj0
I would have gone for you instead of U but the URL was already taken... so hard to find anything good that hasn't already been snapped up these days.
If you have any ideas for URL's then feel free to suggest them and I will check to see if they are available.
- mistermik0
whats with the cuban stars?
- creative-0
Sorry, thought it said 'Uninspired; until I read paraselene's comment above. Maybe you could make the lightbulb into a question mark?
- tank020
first loose the degradé, do something about you kerning
and clean up the image mark.
- Bluejam0
the drawing board just called, it wants you back
- rabbit0
by pulling the U 'out' as you stated earlier ^ does the exact opposite of what you were trying to achieve imo - attempting to hide the fact the word will always read 'uninspired'.
Put the u back in place and perhaps think about using the lightbulb as a '?' at the end. After all, you are asking a question!
- exactly! missed the latter part of this post before commenting myself. Lecture your client on the importance of grammar!Rodimus79
- fodcj0
Thanks for the feeback chaps... I am compiling it all and will make changes when I get a chance...
If you had to choose one of the 3 which would it be?