feedback on logo
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- roberthuston
Hello. I would love some feedback and opinions on these two logo refinements. The colors are not set, so those are open to change, but I questioning the layout of the type next to the logo.
The logo is set. The type face is as well.
Thank you for your feedback! :)<a href="http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3186/3028006313_344deb6e25_o.jpg"></a>
- MrOneHundred0
I think the top blue thread should be a bit tighter-in. What is the target audience? ’Coz that typeface makes me think of McCall’s sewing patterns.
- business people for organic business clothingroberthuston
- Yes, target?pylon
- d'oh, was posted at the same time.
pylon
- non0
I'm sorry Robert, but this is absolutely brutal.
- It looks like it was done in 15 seconds.non
- wow. why do u post such negative shit. use ur time more wisely.roberthuston
- He wasn't wasting time. Maybe this is how he feels. Don't see the actual insult.VectorMasked
- You asked for an opinion. You got it. I am not going to sugar coat it.non
- brains0
I kind of have to agree with non, you might want to restart.
- MrOneHundred0
So when you say “The logo is set. The type face is as well.” do you mean you can only tweak what is already in place?
- pylon0
- Oh crap, 100 is here. That means that I'm here too late and should go home...pylon
- k. thanks.roberthuston
- hahahah. I’ve been here for hours. It must be getting really late there.MrOneHundred
- 8:30pm only, but man it feels later! I just got back from the airport and am checking mail etc.pylon
- roberthuston0
yup. I was trying to get opinion on which type orientation was better.
- Ah.
Disregard previous comment. Unless you're looking to start over.pylon
- Ah.
- MrOneHundred0
You could try and do something with the threads, like incorporate the E and T initials into the weave, and maybe get some dimensionality happening.
- pylon0
^^^ Agreed.
Maybe by making the threads the same line-weight as your font? The 't' could easily be incorporated into one of the threads if you wanted.
- Corvo20
can't quite understand why you ask for opinion with so much limitations.
- 3point141590
the typeface and color palette do not seem to be hitting the mark
- tasty0
this feels like it's for maxi pads or something.
and i'm usually nice on logo critiques.
- VectorMasked0
Characters are too close together. You are having problems mostly with the e, a and s due their roundness.
The threads are what mostly need work. You could almost create a work of art if you could make them slightly more lively and realistic without making them the exact same width from one edge to the other.
- MrOneHundred0
Sorry, roberthurston, I don’t think anyone is trying to be critical here, I think there is a lot of potential if you can get the “stakeholders” to give you a chance to unlock it. I trust you have the skillZ.
- I'm being critical.
But hopefully constructively.
This has the potentialz.pylon
- I'm being critical.
- roberthuston0
Alright, alot to go on. Thanks everyone for ur input.
- VectorMasked0
...May the skillZ be with you...
- dbloc0
different font, and that looks more like basket weaving than a thread. Thread is super thin.
- gramme0
Agree with brains and non, this is simply not good. At the risk of sounding harsh, I would start over. The concept is lazy and the typography is poor. The kerning in particular is all wrong.
- jevad0
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