web layout crit

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  • oldelpaso0

    lol where to start... :P
    i dont really feel i can give a proper crit cause i reckon ur gonna change it all anyway.. or add so much to it that whatever i say will be pretty redundant :)

    however.. from that...
    1- lose the funny patterned backround its too hectic - or give it a softer opacity & softer blend
    2-that longo could be scaled down a lot
    3-the nav seems to be thrown in there for the sake of it
    4-the footer text wants to be center alignned
    5-softer dropshadows on the header + site body
    6-the header is obnoxiously huge to JUST contain a name..(youve dedicate a QUARTER of ur site JUST to the name...)
    7-maybe think about using some pixel fonts instead.. for footer text or nav
    8-this is a personal thing - but when i use lined rules (on header) i like them to be SUPER thin.. like .25pt to 1pt (max)

    a few pointers.. hope it helps jay

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