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    I'm afraid I agree with vanilla_cam - it isn't gelling together well, I'm afraid (imo, obviously!)

    The swoosh buttons are a bit weak, the tapering/fading detail from the main box is a bit naff. I don't think you should be duplicating the jumping-guy photo. I do think you should be making more of the Welsh tribal tattoo thing (though, be wary of duplicating as-is, like you have under Anglesey Adverntures). Overall, the styling's very safe and middling - almost like it's marketing to OAP Daily Mail readers, rather than the Youth I assume it's supposed to. Guess that impression has something to do with the safe, friendly sky colours. I guess it's from The Client, but that 'Coasteering' line is fuckawful - what does that even mean?

    I guess it's hard to appraise this fairly without seeing how that central Flash element works... but if it's not doing much, then I think it's too big.

    Sorry, fella - just not feeling it.

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    • There should only be one swoosh button (the right one) have no content from client, so this is a visual testMojo
    • the doubled images, is only because that's the only image I have had from him so farMojo
    • I appear to be guessing a lot.detritus
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