crit my song
crit my song
Out of context: Reply #11
- Started
- Last post
- 19 Responses
- pressplay0
sounds very homemade, but not in a good sense... I don't judge the song itself but the way it sounds now it's more like a demo/ sketch you would play to your bandmates... it lacks the warmth of musicians interacting/ groove / vibe / swing / whatever... for this kind of music: get a real bass, a good mic, skip the effects and then play the parts over and over again... voice sounds slightly insecure, hiding behind a bored tone... singing is hard, I know, but this is not even close to what it could be if you would let yourself get more into it