New Portfolio Site Crit
New Portfolio Site Crit
Out of context: Reply #11
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- robotron3k1
"Hi, I’m Michael. A process-guided, User-focused, Passionate, Product designer. (And cheeseburger aficionado.)"
I feel like your site is like your first sentence, all over the map and with unnecessary initial caps.
Clean this site up, remove all unnecessary content until you have only your work samples and contact page.
This is all you need, make it lean and mean.
I feel the rest is distracting.
Remove your photo completely and rewrite the first sentence to read, "hello, my name is Michael, I design applications and do UX" then a button to your work samples.
Hope this helps...
- Another way to think about it is there should be no foreplay in portfolios, you need to get right to it.robotron3k
- a rare occasion where I agree with robo, he's 100% right.fadein11
- Aye, as much of a sexist flid as he can be on here sometimes, robo's good at teh feedbacks.Nairn