Logo Critque
Logo Critque
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- BaskerviIle1
Nice!
My feedback would be to justify to yourself when and where you use the gaps between the forms. eg: the gap between the highest raised leg and the body makes sense to indicate depth behind the horse's body but makes less sense on the foreground raised leg. I would make as much of it filled as possible, especially the main horse's body since it will help with the overall read and silhouette. I'd maybe reduce the size of the horse's head and introduce some space between it and the knight to help the separation/read also.
I'd also look at the relationship between the curves and straights.
I think the eyes and the notches in the feet are too small to replicate well at small sizes, particularly in embroidery.