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• Chimp0

  Hey this is looking good! I personally like the overall aesthetic.

  What emotions do you want to transmit? Who's your audience?

  On a high level I feel the balanced could be improved and the shapes seem to conflict with each other. Could it be more fluid and have more movement in it? It's for a car brand so I'd expect it to be little more dynamic.

  Looking closer, some of the details may be lost when it's reproduced in leather or metal. What happened to the Knight's feet?

  I would look to simplify it by taking out some of the gaps and the tiny details.
  

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  • It's Heralidic in nature, not dynamic and "fast".canoe
  • Cool, I think you're on the right track.Chimp

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