tear my new poster apart plz
tear my new poster apart plz
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- sarahfailin2
Here's a new version with darker background AND dropshadow AND the text changes.
thanks again for all the help and guidance!
- maybe soften the white of the text down below so it's more like the banner above?sarahfailin
- i still don't really know how to deal with the "2023"sarahfailin
- make it smaller, the 2023. otherwise all looks good.shapesalad
- if the banner background was white instead of grey, I think it would work better. Looks great noiw!mort_
- you could even go for a pink background. have you thought about doing that?milfhunter
- The jester character gets lost in the muddied details. Needs better silhouetting. Maybe fade the purple rays behind with a dissolve....monNom
- Maybe make the tree canopy in a yellow tone. That will help set apart the different elements in the composition.monNom
- Type in the banner could be improved. Main banner has unequal spacing top and bottom. Ampersand feels like it could be separated and made as a cool stand alonemonNom
- In the position of the 2023. Maybe intertwined with the ribbons? 2023 could be below the Mardi Gras bit.monNom
- The ribbon could be continuous and loop back and forth between the lines in sort of an art nouveau style. That will complement the twisty organic bordermonNom
- The background needs a dim job, your jester needs pop, not camo.garbage
- Great edits. I love the way 'Rolls from' reads right and down. Good work, @sarahfailin!Nairn
- ooh, hold on. lol, sorry - 'Rolls from' and the time aren't aligned
;)Nairn - 'rolling from', eedjitNairn