Kick Bio's Ass
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- hiphoprelic0
It's got a nice, dark feel to it.
I'm afraid the type is not very legible though. I see the same problem with many flyers/posters for bands & shows.
The text, at least the major text needs to grab the average passer by. However cool the graphic is, if the viewer does not remember what it's promoting it is all in vein.
- 4cY0
- Bio0
er... uhm...
http://www.askoxford.com/diction…
- piperboytoy0
Did I mention I love the art work too? BIO rocks
- unknown0
"cruel, hard-hearted, ill-tempered, malicious, nasty, sneaky, spiteful, uncharitable, unkind, vicious."
thats about right...
its only because I have a cold today...bah
- Bio0
thanks piper! mucho appreciation and respectograph. (yes, i did just make that word up... but i like it)
kk, all good man.
- exador0
seriously nice bio..
beautiful compostition..
nicely framed...haunting,
great use of colour..
a bit hard to read the type..
but if thats an effect you're going for..good enough..over all..
A+
great work man...
:)
- Bio0
cool ex.
that is what the general consensus seems to be.
"type is difficult to read/needs kerning, the light source is distracting,"these are the things i plan to work on anyhow. it will, however, remain "twee".
- clique0
err... sorry bio. Don't like to kick yer ass. I realise you're playin around but it kinda looks... um... amateurish. You need to work on your typographic skills abit more. The type sits awkwardly and is too dark. The pic and composition is also abit weak. really sorry. ya did ask for opinions.
- clique0
I feel bad now.
- Bio0
clique. man, that is all fine and good. speak your mind!
i agree. the text is poorly thought out. i will be working on it tonight and putting some more thought into it. this piece in in it's middle stages now i guess.
i'll repost it after i work on it some more.then you can tear it apart some more. but seriously. if you see something that could be improved, dont feel bad for telling me!
so long as you arent bein a dickhead about it, then any and all comments are welcomed!
- cessil0
you are a brave man! I wouldn't put stuff up here incase I got rrripped to shreds! One problem with it tho - can't really see her titties. Need to lighten them up.
;-)
- schjetne0
cessil: You don't dare to show your shit in the PV-AN? That's wrong man. Don't care about the aggressive fuckheads. There's lots of good folks here with constructive things to say.
- JazX0
I kicked your butt as a kid, I don't need to do it anymore ;)
- clique0
aw cool. phew. don't want to appear negative and put a downer on yer stuff man. I knew it was work in progress. so goodluck with it!! :-D
- Bio0
haha. yea. there is a certain risk that you must be willing to take when posting personal shit on NT.
i post here because i know that some folks will dig it and this will encourage me. and then i know that some folks will rip it to shreds and exaggerate my mistakes.
so, i get torn to bits, and still come away feeling good, but like i still need to work more.
this morning's crit has been surprisingly nice compared to many i have seen.a lot of folks get too into it and will just be mean spirited. when i see someone act like that, i assume they have had a bad day or are simply venting insecurities and i try not to put a lot of stock in what they say. it's all good.
today has been a good crit. no one was a big asshole except kk, but he's alright in my book, so i let him get away with it. hehe. many thanks guys. ill try and post my revisions tomorrow or something.
- Gorbie0
Looks interesting, Bio. I like where it's heading. The lighting is excellent, and all the shadows are true. Good attention to detail.
Suggestion:
+ Too much negative space.
I think if you brought out a little more contrast in the image and type it would fix that. I happen to like the bright light. I think a bolder more vivid appearance would be more interesting. Sort of a contradiction to the sometimes dull conotations of a sepia image.
+ Type
Looks like an after thought. Work with it more. Typeface is fine. Just message it a bit.
- cessil0
Nooooo way schjetne! I know there's alot of talented folk on here with good things to say! But I'm happy believing I'm average thanks. ;-)
- 4cY0
bring a copy, Bio!
I'll buy it and frame it.
for some reason i still like it despite the comments here.
and oh yeah, I am honest 'bout it..as for the light/flare...
don't make it less shiny, only smaller..
other then that, I'll be yer first buyer.