design critique - vegas company
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- sexypixel0
2nd one is nicer, the first one is nice but very un original and wanky. maybe loose the 4 images down the side. too busy. what the fuck am i doing in nt giving crits while im holidays fucken hell im out of here good night
- jevad0
first one is a bott too ultrashock for my liking.
second one is nice but it needs a little tightening up - like the colors and use of space better - menu gets a little lost up there....
- lind0
2nd one -- looks more corporate like you said -- and more appropriate for the business.
- Nairn0
2nd one for me too, but just make the top 'heavier' - maybe by Bigging-Up the nav?
- oculasm0
ooo definately the second one it looks very nice. much cleaner and easier on the eyes.
- ikbenvanrijn0
i kinda like the 1st one. i am not to sure about the light blue. maybe go with a blue that had a lil gray in it. less "neon"
as for the corp look, try to stay away from it. why not set the site apart.
bottom links have a nice font.. but too light in my opinion.
scroll bar in the welcome thingy has green/olive? why? doesnt match the blue.
main photo looks nice, but the sun is hurting my eyes.
bottom part: why not have the dates standout more? yeah ok the news in important but if you continue to use the css bgcolor use a diff font color to match the rest of the site.
otherwise, layout is fine, concept was good, but the execution is alittle poor.
i'll give you a 6 out of 10
- phutura0
great feedback from all you guys, thanks! beers on me! :)
- bomy_dick0
lol
1st one is a bit 2advanced to my taste :) .. really..second misses something. the pics ont the right in grey should be in color or duotone.. the cenral pic with the man should be changed ? why this guy ? what does he do (too many questions)
menu on top is squeezed. u should make it larger (higher) and chaneg the font
- pascii0
or me 1. i found the information much faster. maybe use a less dark colour?