stationary comps - feedback
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- phutura
i just finished these stationary comps for a client. i already picked the paper and its going in for 2color printing. these dont look as good on the screen at this resolution as they do on paper but your feedback's welcome.
http://www.refluxdesign.com/clie…
p.s. i also designed the new identity.
- brooke0
Stationery.
Looks good. Comps 1 & 2 are better than the third. Nice job with composition & color.
- brundlefly0
I like number one personallly.....
its very smart
- atomica0
Lookin good phutura.... I personally am attracted to one and three. Three, because its so different and bold. Good stuff all around....
- phutura0
damn typo, thx. :)
for some reason the watermark on the third one came out way darker on the screen than on paper, its set at only 4% opacity in illustrator.
- atomica0
I agree.... maybe kern it to fill a bit more space at the bottom? meh... dunno.... but i agree somethings not quite right about it.
- oeuf0
buis. card - no.1
Letterhead and Envelope - no.2
- qaddisin0
damn good work. like the way you presented the comps. might steal that idea instead of just printed matter they can view it on the web organized-like. :)
your portfolio's getting pretty heavy too. cheers
- qaddisin0
damn good work. like the way you presented the comps. might steal that idea instead of just printed matter they can view it on the web organized-like. :)
your portfolio's getting pretty heavy too. cheers
- TNDAP0
I have not read the other posts, so forgive me if I am repeating, anyway, first off great job, nice use of color and layout, #3 is way to busy, I am undecided , but #1 and #2 are the ones I dig. but #1 is so fresh and so clean I think I'll go with that one.