Design critique please ++
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- erok0
Doh..
Yes, I do agree...
I am going to work on it tonight... I do agree..
Keep the feedback coming my friends..
:-)
_e
- erok0
I forgot to mention..
the first page:
http://ericshoemaker.com/ka/ka.h…
is dynamic..
Photo changes out to make it a bit more interesting.
_e
- dave_bxcr0
hi.
i like the landscape format.
the design is minimal but it lacks a bit of identity, a problem a lot of (not yet strong) minimal design things have. so reconsider that one.
on the other hand the pics are quite shit too, very conservative clicks apart from his personal work wich is ockay, not great but i'd like to visit the places he takes shots of ...whatever.my humble opinion.
: )bye
- jevad0
I'd suggest taking:
-- style sheets freekin cock --
out of the source before it goes live
- honda0
lol
um, erok, sup with that comment in the source?
lolhate to say it, but i do agree about the ungoodness of the photography. hell, erok you take better pictures than her.
it is what it is i guess.
*meltron aiming for 100*
=P
- jevad0
holy shit - I broke 6000 posts this morning!
- erok0
Haha..
If you read my code, you must be pretty bored..
:-)
I make love to CSS.
- erok0
It's "rock"
not cock..
DOH!
You guys don't like her flicks?
Man, that girl makes a good living doing that..
Keep it coming friends..
Yo, the comment "Shit" was not needed.. I am sure you can find a better way to say that, than "shit"..
_er
- jevad0
click between 'engagements' and 'personal work'....see the shift there...not good....
- cyberthug0
Yo kid, the design is cool, whatever... Let's rate these hoes in the ENGAGEMENTS section!!!
1. Jessica - pretty hot Latina. I would definitely get with this shit. I like that mole on her right cheek(face). She also has a long ass neck, which reminds me of that painting period when they stretched out all the bitches necks.
2. This bitch has a little too much ass, but I won't lie... she reminds of my 3rd grade teacher. She gets a dickie ride just for that. Nice rack. She's got that lazy eye shit which is hot in a sick way.
3. If I was drunk, this chick would be hella hot. I would be talking shit the next day about how I hit this fine ass bitch, how she was like a 9 and shit. The husband is definitely gay though. C'mon man, just come out the closet, yo! I got gay friends. I mean we don't kick it, but it's cool....
- jevad0
fuck off cyberdork
- cyberthug0
Let's face it. Married chicks are hot. I just wanna defile 'em up, son.
- lilbabyleg0
that's the only problem with flash IMHO. I wanna bookmark some of these hoes.
- cyberthug0
Gay-vad, don't get yourself caught up in some Tupac beef. Ya'unnastand?
- jevad0
twit
and the ignore list grows on....
- erok0
HOLY SHIT !
Yo, calm down...
:-)
I was dying reading that post... I know Josh and his wife..
haha
_e
- cyberthug0
great, now I can make clown your stupid ass for everyone else to see, without your bitch ass remarks cluttering things up!
- erok0
:-(
_erok
- cyberthug0
I'm sad too. I miss you Gayvad. Come back to Jamaica.
- fifty500
I didn't read anyone else's responses because i wanted to be unbiased. I have few complaints about the website, and mostly praise.
The site is well designed and is easy to navigate. Kudos on that. However, when loading the thumbnails, i'd much rather see the photos straight away than wait for them to slide to the centre of that box.
Also, on the splash page, you should consider raising the frame rate of this movie to about 30-60 frames per second, making the drawing look a lot smoother. And when the "KA" fades out, you should make it just a little more visible, because I see it's supposed to be screened back, but I think it's just a little too light.
On the contact page, some of the text appears blurred. In Flash, select these text boxes and make sure they are set directly on pixels, without any decimals. That's probably what is causing that blurred appearance. Fix that, and you're good to go.
Other than that, the design is good. Nice job :)