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- pascii0
the one with no finger!
kommt gut!
- cyc22220
thx. It still needs a lot of work, but for now I like it.
- warheros0
kind of weird that the title text is the same size as the other text below it, kind of makes it blend togther.
and yes, the one without the finger.
the colors are nice.
it seems to me that you have too many fonts going on, too much tension there.
my opinions_
- cyc22220
Yeah, I was thinking that there are too many fonts too.
The size of the bands will change, as these aren't the only bands.
- ad10
if you want to keep the "confrontational' finger - try halftone filter in a montone pn it. make it look less real photo. maybe??
- warheros0
yeah, the fact that the finger is more photo-quality than the rest of the poster makes it jump out in a bad way. see if you can do something else to it/the poster to make it more of the same idea as the rest of the images you have laid out there.
- DutchBoy0
teh first!
- kbags0
I agree wtih warheros ^^
The first one is more better thowe.
- lilbabyarm0
can you make it a little cooler?
- ad10
i know you wanna
you know you wanna
i know you wanna
you know you wanna
i know you wanna
you know you wanna
give me the finga!
- lilbabyarm0
better get a scoop before iz gone
- ad10
:)
- DutchBoy0
damn, do i need to be the one to ruin the party again? ok, then.
they are both horrible, even worse then the first, because legibility is completely gone.
Only for the second time i could read the really, really lightweight letters you used for some subheaders.There's too many conflicting fonts in this composition, the background (taken from your first design i presume)does not fit the trashy feel you are trying to accomplish with it.
really try not to drop detail on top of detail, instead think of it as a whole. a total concept in color, form and composition.
i think you need to look at some other very good posters that were done for similar events.
good luck.
- heavyt0
no finger:
also, the "I" is hard to read in that font (base02, i think).
you need to add a lil space aroung it, cuz otherwise you dont read it.peace and hairgrease,
TR1
- warheros0
yes, DutchBoy!