logo crit please
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- irrelevant0
right you are snuggles..
wanted a baseball type.. since it has a baseball tie-in..
- Dancer0
None sorry:
"Too Cool for Skool"
- stewart0
1-3 is a sort of "search the differences" game.
and the S looks too devil-ish.
- mr_snuggles0
creampuff.
- black-marmalade0
number 4. Trust me . I'm not wrong often when it comes to design.
- grayhood0
can we see it irrelevant?
- bulletfactory0
i agree with ya irrelevant
Pro Bono is not Latin for "half-assed"
- irrelevant0
Regardless of "Pro-Bono" I would look at it as a nice portfolio piece.
I would most likely have some book imagery and an arrow working. I think in about 3 hours you could really have something functional and you are happy with. I did my last one pro bono and it's one of my fav logos I have done.
Anyways, good luck.
- bulletfactory0
I'm not sure I quite understand what you mean by "hanging over" DutchBoy. would you mind explaining a tad further?
thanks!
trent
- DutchBoy0
hey what if you keep all the other letters normal, not hanging over like they do now.. it makes it look unbalanced and can make you feel sort of seasick if you stare long enough..
just keep the trick on the d (ascender) and it might be just fine.
they all look as if you tried a lil too hard imho.
- grayhood0
5 gets my vote.
- bulletfactory0
i agree with you blaw - especially the version with the arrow on the "s" - it sort of has a devil tail quality - wasn't sure if anyone else saw it. hmm.
- blaw0
the arrow seems a bit much to me.
it's give me that "red hott" devil feel, which is certainly not what you're going for.
- uncle_helv0
I agree with Snuggles it is a bit too trendy not very arts & science.
Find logos of similar groups/see if your logo would sit comfortable amongst them.
- _salisae_0
lookin good mr carter
s looks evil though.
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- Spix0
i like #4 for it's 'S'. cool.
- bulletfactory0
their server is being rebuilt after a fatal crash. This is all i could find..... not really a logo - but it's what they were using to represent their network....
http://web.archive.org/web/20040…
Thanks again for the input. I look forward to more!!
t
- k0na_an0k0
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- flickster0
I like 5 the best. DO you have a copy of the old logo to post also?