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- brandelec0
start over methinks
- studderine0
Yea, this is a really small time client..small time...as in 250 bucks for a site and logo. I am doing to get my feet wet, and to get some exposure. I personally just started doing "design" 6 months ago. But thank you to those who are greatly disencouraging..jevad..and the likes.
- Hym0
"worried
Worried that i have no talent..ever get that sometimes. sometimes i have no motivation to go on with design or anything..its lame."you really weren't kidding
- uberdesigner0
don't be a baby...get a book of logos and make something that sort of looks like one of those, make it in vector
- brandelec0
just cos its a cheap job, its still a job, don't do it half-ass if this is what you need to get your feet wet
- grafholic0
i guess my issue with that page is geometry.
i'm not saying you need to make things symmetrical or hold balance all the time.
then again, i really don't get the randomness in the range between wheel and the incomplete circle (starts out narrow, then get wider, then somehow it goes slightly narrower), or the about 85 degree corner in the red part of the logo, or the difference in width and length of the red thingie in the logo.
and the image really doesn't tell me what this site is about...do they sell wheel? custom wheel? or fix cars? make custom cars?
..you know that type of stuff.
- studderine0
ahh yes..the snobby designer..guess thats not what i want to be. and yes i was serious, some of my shit just comes out lame.
- brains0
bah, take it in stride. Jevad's not trying to be discouraging.. at least I don't think so. But encouraging you to improve it. If you hit the drawing board again and come back with something, chances are you'll get more than an "omfg". If not, just mention something about having an extra 23inch cinema display to give away to the nicest NTer.
If your client is happy, that's fine, but it's also for exposure. You should also consider how well it represents you.
- studderine0
a wheel? its a reel guys! a reel..howwda get a wheel from that?
- grafholic0
sorry engrish is my second language.
- TResudek0
You should've told everyone this is a logo crit and not a site crit to start with... that is why a lot of people reacted negatively. People expect to see a site and they see a holding page. Don't take it personally.
As for the logo... the reel is too big because it really shouldn't be the focus of the mark. The "guy" is the most unique part of it and that'd probably be the thing to focus on. The letter spaceing and the type, in general' could use some time spent on it. And... vector, vector, vector. Nothing in this logo requires it to be raster and you'll find your life a lot easier in the future if this is vector.
TR
- uberdesigner0
I thought it was for a dude ranch
- brandelec0
ror graf
- grafholic0
wait, so if this is a logo, what's coming soon? store? site? what?
- cosmo0
But thank you to those who are greatly disencouraging..jeva d..and the likes.
studderine
(Jun 22 05, 15:17)hahahah...u must new here.
- cosmo0
But thank you to those who are greatly disencouraging..jeva d..and the likes.
studderine
(Jun 22 05, 15:17)hahahah...u must be new here.
cosmo
(Jun 22 05, 15:25)
- grafholic0
i'm gonna stop using eres and start using arrs from now.
rarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!
- studderine0
I did this is vector but couldn't save it as a .jpg or the likes. And thanks to those who gave me some crit, I am gonna go back and try again and post it and see what's you alls thinks.
- Hym0
so 6 months...
i know that mothers are proud when their kid does a first poo on the potty but you are not your own mother right?
- studderine0
ah..whateva...