Layout Crit
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- brandelec0
layout is real clean
would like to see a color from the logotype to be used around the page
what does 'LSSS' stand for? can it be placed at the top too?
i'd give the top menu a makeover just cos its repeated at the bottom of the page
- grafholic0
simple and clean layout.
if i may suggest, i might make the footer links centralized instead of left aligned.
- grafholic0
hmm...instead of yellowish color, how about something more green?
i associate gray, green, and blue with medical type of stuff.
- brandelec0
yea, something cooler.. i like the light blue-ish tint on the main header
may be even keep the two sections in a white bg but outline it with a color - just a suggestion
- toe_knee0
They type under the logo looks muddy, maybe make it a shade of grey?
- jpolk0
pretty boring dude, my eyes don't know where to go, automatically. newer color scheme is weak. looks kinda 'bloggy'
- toe_knee0
also the phone number looks a little tacked on, like it was put in in the last minute. Its make it a bit more stylised.
- toe_knee0
Its make it a bit more stylised.
toe_knee
(Jul 11 05, 16:37)should say 'I'd make it"
- ethios0
jpolk, yeah im fixing these opacitized blocks of colour right now, they just look washed out and shit, what would you suggest?
- toe_knee0
never was a fan of black body copy either. maybe use a shade of grey...?
- ethios0
black body copy?
- toe_knee0
the black text, its over powering compaired to the soft background colours
- ethios0
yay / nay? i need bed
- toe_knee0
i think the first colours were the best, but use grey text and maybe make the nav links a different colour. be subtle
- grafholic0
i think they're a bit too vivid for quitting smoking...just saying, coz i'm a smoker...
- jevad0
i'd like to see a more defined grid, tighter spacing, and some hierarchy in the text
the menu seems oddly out of place and somewhat removed from the rest of the site...
- ethios0
thanks guys, all crits are much appreciated!