logo crit
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- piperboytoy0
How are those shapes based on the company's philosphy? if it's an eclectic feeling, i'm not getting it from that tear burst icon, nor the typeface selection. WHat you've done is a retro look, and that's completely different from what you descripted the club to be.
But do as you will.
- rise0
I think you're missing a fundamental part,
the typography is all wrong.
- Linda0
maybe you can explain what is wrong? positioning, some letters, or the whole typeface?
- doesnotexist0
the look is really dated, i mean, unless you want a vintage flowery feeling, id stay away from what you got going on now.
- Linda0
ok. I will try some more stuff and check what the client thinks. I get your points but I do think it matches with the feelng of the club...
thanks for the help, I'm out to get some dinner :P
- rise0
there is no balance or consistence of form in the type face, its great to do custom stuff, but sometimes it just doesnt work.
- piperboytoy0
You need to go research real vintage feel, like go look at old movie posters or flyers, graphics and report back with something more dynamic.
You basically presented 1 idea to the client. Changing the colors and type size isn't really a new option, just a variation.
Anytime i present something to a client, I always give them a choice. but anyway. just my thought. you probably won't even get it.
- Linda0
sure I get your point, that's what I said, I'll try some more logos, one is not enough.
now I'm really out
have a good weekend!
- Mojo0
Wahh! Sorry, but that logo graphic - that thing has been so over done! Everyone has a logo based on that with bits cut out and joined ! arg!
- Salli0
hey isnt that logo originally from a supermarket? cant remember the name.. it has different colors though..
i like the 2nd the best btw.
- stewart0
yep salli
PLUS supermarkets have sort of the same abstracted flower thing in their logoand on their own hot-air balloon has the same shape
http://www.dutchballoonregister.…
- Crouwel0
ah stewart just beat me to it!
stewart, ga fietsen man. het is superlekker weer!!
;)
- stewart0
fietsen!
i gefietst this weekend for sure janne.and next week i'm off to Leuk (!) in Switzerland for some serious mountainbiking
http://www.leuk.ch/e/and my url was much shorter.