Event Ticket Crit
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- slinky
I am making an event ticket that we will give out to mark the launch of our sports fan site.
i am not much of a print guy, so any good crit's will help
thankshttp://jasonmorrow.com/tic...
- a-train0
get rid of the picture of the tv and incorporate the "prize' text into the ticket more... not just something that is "attached"
Looks good though, I like the thumb :)
- slinky0
here is another one...
a-train? so remove the TV eh?
i do want the ticket to look like it is detachable, since we are trying to partner with a sports restaurant and we want to have discount coupons for the sports restaurants on the ticket...
but i will try what you said...
and give thanks to Brooke for making the logo... i gave her an idea and she made it awesomely.
- eficks0
heh, i like the end zone idea.
- pocho0
tighten up the T and E in TEAM a bit. I like V3.
- bighappen0
hello slinky
Could you make the ball a touch bigger so it overlaps the words 'network' and 'team' or make it a bit smaller so there is more space round it?
the vertical spacing between 'to win a' and 42" is quite tight.
But that said i am only being picky, i like it.