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- tenpointtwo0
hey jpolk, I am a designer, but thanks for cutting me down personally instead of critting my work. glad you think it's THAT bad.
cheers
- tenpointtwo0
everyone else, thanks for the comments. this is what a rough draft is all about. at least for me
- ArtDirector0
It looks like there's 5 pieces floating on a white background. Unify them somehow. The client login seems too big. Make it work ;)
- jpolk0
like i said, not trying to be mean. but there is nothing redeemable about that site. it's awful. there's nothing else to say about it - there's nothing there, no concept, it's awful, visually.
some crits are that cut and dry - never had a harsh professor?
- jpolk0
btw, you should know this... you have a decent portfolio site...
;)
scrap that shit and start fresh...
- ArtDirector0
you're not going to impress JennyMarie with that layout, add some more cowbells and details. You're a good designer based on your personal site, use your assets
- tenpointtwo0
I'm not looking to get into it with you. "It's awful" is not a cut and dry crit. I've had harsh professors. I have thick skin. But you didn't crit anything. You said hire a designer. That's a personal comment, dude. Not a crit. You can bash my work to all hell, it's part of the game. But you made a sarcastic personal remark, and I dont need that shit. I'm a proffesional, and I assumed most people on here were too. So let's keep it above the belt, k?
;)
- jpolk0
i thought i was clearly joking... we need a sarcasm tag...
- jakeyj0
//we have one
- jpolk0
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- isoceles1800
1. i would move the whole thing up to the top more. For those very few users on 800X600.
2. the rounded corners and angled corner arent worrking together becasue the angle has sharp points. Corners are too big I would chuck them or make them alot smaller as stated above.
3. I'm not feeling the gradients.
4. I thnk all these pieces need to be tighter. They seem too far a part like puzzle pieces that don't fit together.
**I say get rid or the corner angle. Now that I look at it more they are distraction me for the copy and the nav. **
maybe you could extend that clak box all the way and put the login in the blackbox. chuch the rounded inputboxs on the login too.
Good start but I thnk these things may help you a bit. keep workig it until you can look at it and be proud.
-doss
- jpolk0
see, that's what i'm saying. it's not a good start... can't encourage people to do a shitty job...
- jpolk0
^ for instance, you nagged on every single element of the site, just to say good start...
just say start over, you can't polish a turd....