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- e_b_c0
how the hell i got a q on the front of critique is beyond me.
- spendogg0
i hear the "Q" is the new "C".
- e_b_c0
i probably should have gone with that, but i'm tired, and not funny.
how are ya spenn?
- -scarabin-0
it sort of bothers me how contained and trapped the bird seems
what if you moved it to the left and up so the tail feathers were escaping the circle and he had more space to fly forward into?
you would also be able to make the bird bigger because of this new room, which would be better because it's the important piece that will be branded into people's minds, not the circle
- monNom0
I like the bird but it's head shouldn't touch the circle.
stars are good, but not feeling how you've used them.
type seems a bit too graphic
maybe something more brushy?
Italic would probably work too.
- -scarabin-0
i actually like the font choice, it feels very bicycle to me
like classic bicycle brand or something
- Nac_part20
hmm...good start...in a way i agree with 'setting the bird free'....perhaps integrated with the S?
just a suggestion...keep on it mang, good stuff
- e_b_c0
good point(s).
keep 'em coming.
thanks!
- level2b0
Set the bird free. It wants to fly.
- magicpatch0
i like the direction, but it somehow feels like there are too many languages trying to speak at once.
try making the stroke size of the circle the same as the typeface, and simplify the logo mark. the swift motion of the bird does work good with the capital S
- e_b_c0
I agree that the birs wants out. i think i got hung up that the shop owner is dead set on making round patches out of the icon. there may have to be 2 versions of the bird.
i also feel like the little guy is getting lost in the fray.
- _salisae_0
i like it and it's not just because i'm in a good mood with the wonderful weather and my plans to float down the river in helena
- e_b_c0
i like it and it's not just because i'm in a good mood with the wonderful weather and my plans to float down the river in helena
_salisae_
(Mar 10 06, 13:28)thanks! even if it were just your good mood.
- spendogg0
Doing well Evan - I agree that the nose and wing touching make undesireable tangents. I think it would look faster if the bird used straight lines instead of curved.
- uberdesigner0
good times
good times
- _salisae_0
they're right. the bird looks like it's flying into a glass window. and i like all the letters except the S. looks a little wobbley.
- level2b0
The weather in NYC is amazing today.. Im in a good mood as well
- twooh0
wawwww
- e_b_c0
Thanks for the input from everyone.
I will tweak, and update monday!