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- myobie
i have been working on this crap and i am soooo uninspired
take a look at let me know if i am finally headed in a good direction
- doesnotexist0
that weird curvey thing in the banner is weird. maybe the news type needs to be smaller. way smaller. throw some more blue in there?
- myobie0
yeah, needs more color...i am working on trying to standardize on some set colors
the curvy thing, iono what it's for...i was kinda hoping i would think of something...
thanx for the feedback
i will be working on this for the rest of the day
- Jaline0
doesn't look bad. I agree about the curve. It's interesting, but should probably be changed..
I don't think the news needs to be too small, but maybe it shouldn't be bold.
- OSFA0
More cowbell.
- myobie0
cowbell: ?
no-bold: ?
- myobie0
well, i tried to put a checkmark unicode thing in and it came out as ?
i meant, cowbell: check, etc
sheesh, back to work
- k0na_an0k0
the news text should be smaller. remove the curve. make it a straight line.
also. not digging the overlap gray from all the lines where it's darker when the overlap.
nice start though. take a break and come back later to finish when you're fresh.
- Jaline0
Yeah, I'll have to agree with k0na now. And that's also basically what myobie said.
- OSFA0
Nice start. I agree. Take a break and come back to it later. Maybe post something on the PS Battle thread.
;)
- myobie0
yeah, i will mess with the news text size, bold, etc when i get it into html+css
the curvy line tho, yeah it's weird...making it straight is quick...
i gotta finish the product categories at the bottom tho...no copywriting available...
thanx for the encouragement