Logo / page crit...
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- wckd
Doing a logo / site design for an annual FMX event...
This xtreem inuff?
Client says he wants "red bull" but not all that grungy..
Much appreciated.
- wckd0
Also, is that F too A?
- horton0
yeah sorry the F is not working.
- detritus0
Not sure about that F, nor the integration of the 'Casino GP' logo.
Have you any variants on the helmet trace? There's something slightly unsettling about the level of complexity in there vs. the ordered smoothness of your letter forms. I'd try either making the helmet more detailed (chunkier and rougher) or less so (iron out some of those curve points).
- PonyBoy0
i have no idea what that first letter is too...
... make that legible and i think you gotz something... looks extreme-ish and the angles/sharpness of the graphic work well w/your layout...
... i see a lil 'r' in there... I see an 'A' too... but no 'F'. :)
- dirtydesign0
Fix the F and loose the helmet. I do like the style of the 08...with the white lines thru it.
- dbloc0
the logo doesn't match the site. I think the logo needs a little grunge on or around it to match the site.
- capn_ron0
I would lose the helmet and maybe add some tire tracks for the grunge affect. Or maybe dirt splatter, or something other than the helmet.
- waynepixel0
Logo does not read very well, I like the helmet, the Grand Prix need some work as well as the Casino text.
I would put Casino And Grand Prix in red, loss the blue strips, and try and make the it read BMX, at the moment it looks like AMX
I like the site layout, style, good.
- Ampersanderson0
Any updates?
- wckd0
Updates as soon as I get back to work :)
Anyway, thanks for the feedback.
So I guess I'll fiddle with that F an the helmet..
BTW: that casino GP part is just a mandatory addition to the logo (main sponsor or smth.) So no changing that :(
- ldww0
what is the blob to the right of the logo?
no idea what the firs tletter is.
- wckd0
So.. this read F?
- wckd0
new start:
- agentfour0
ahhhhhhhhhhh no!!
first one (after you adjusted the F)was way better, just needed a little tweaking here and there.
- Ampersanderson0
no. go with the first one...
but you have some great triangular shapes you should be utilizing more (top of M, sides of X). why not cut out a similar shape in the side of the F? it would unify them as a real logo.
- Ampersanderson0
wckd, check yr email.
- detritus0
ahhhhhhhhhhh no!!
first one (after you adjusted the F)was way better, just needed a little tweaking here and there.
agentfour
(Nov 1 07, 04:14)Yeah, I'm sorry if I didn't add any positives into my previous post - doesn't mean there weren't any, just that the kinks were hampering my perception.