Logo crit
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- gramme0
basically run w/ #4 as one of your main concepts and go bonkers with the typographic options.
You need one or two other strong concepts imho....i like the idea of a seal as shown bottom right, it's just not yet working for me.
- skt0
4 is too close but to V&A (but not well enough executed ) for me to be able to see it. Don't mind the marque on 5 but don't like the font.
- totally agree, and it's the only potentially good thing about 4...neue75_bold
- ooh, handbags
;)Concrete - there are so many things close to V&A, wich by the way is a rip from something else...tank02
- radar0
I would say if your going to try the small to large in reference to village, town, country do it in the monogram like the v & t intertwined and encircled by a larger C
- kelpie0
he marque on 5 looks too much like something you have thrown together in illustrator without any meaning, I'd at least try to introduce some contrast in the stroke weights to make it look more crafted and less mac drawn.
- skt0
With regards to no5
- neue75_bold0
try playing with "v+c" possibly as a mark with the full name below. You might be able to use a plus sign "+" to create both the "t" and eliminate the need for the "&"...
- i_monk0
Try a geographic solution.
- Concrete0
- no, not goodtank02
- Makes me think of KFC or TGI FridaysConcrete
- Village is awkward
Dancer - no me gusto este style. Reminds me of characterless high street coffee and sandwich shops.detritus
- What was that about gusto?Concrete
- Yo no likee :)
Not trying to be harsh - just usefully blunt, old boy.detritus - Novoiceof
- Your dogmatic bluntness, Nairn, is your best quality. ;)Concrete
- oh crap, i'm doomed then.detritus
- In a good way. xConcrete
- it's why Nairn and I get along: two blunt old dogmatic pickaxes.gramme
- This looks like No Country For Old Men.gramme
- Dancer0
where's killerqueen. I'm sure he will add some wise words to this conundrum
- drgs0
I like 2B if it had proper gradient and spaces between words
- Concrete0
- love it!doesnotexist
- refine, refine, refine, great concept.doesnotexist
- Yeah the idea is there but looks like V&C at the moDancer
- love this concept.gramme
- use bolder letters. I get that the "t" also = "and", but it now looks like V + C. Just make it VTC.gramme
- let the "and" live as an ampersand in your logotype.gramme
- Work in the type (VT&C) from 4 to this concept?5timuli
- jiaf0
- ComicSans_Rocks0
#4, without the black bar, make symbol larger
- wordssssss0
I say you are well on you way to being done with the bad design, to get to tthe good stuff.
- onewhoslaps0
bottom right is A++ minus the type.
the symbol is the right direction.