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- -kappa-
I just finalised this one of many projects I'm working on. It's a just a simple boutique real estate agents site.
Thoughts?
- VectorMasked0
The elements are too big, wasting valuable space. There's unnecessary scrolling for anybody using the 1024 and 1280 resolutions.
Not digging the white line you have below the main banner image. It's thicker than the white line above the image or any other for that matter. This white line really doesn't blend in well with the gray line you have on the bg.
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- yeah that white line came up after adding H1 tags for some reason, fixed it though. the client wanted big & clean-kappa-
- detritus0
Your rollovers are a little sticky - they're a bit slow to disappear. It'd be nice if there was a slight difference between the roll and the current page button colour. Also, the Helvetica link text is really bitty and artefacted, it spoils what is otherwise a very nicely polished site - I really like your body content section - very open and readable.
Have you considered putting an ALT tag in for these wee icons, so that when I move my mouse over, it tells me what it is - I mean.. I know what they are, I just like redundancy.
Logo's terrible - though I don't imagine there's much you can do about that, eh?
Good shit.
- RoyBoy0
Looking good! Well done Kappa!!!
- Hall0
(^what they're saying)
Nice grid/layout but components are too large. The color scheme could also be refined.
- thismanslife0
Nice. Upper area / header's perhaps rather space-greedy, even when shrunken for the subpages. Otherwise, I imagine the client is/will be really happy with it.
Also, line-length of body copy is a little long, despite the extra line-height to combat it. Not a biggie.
- -kappa-0
thanks all
- -kappa-0
Some updates made throughout. Menu reduced in height and appearance. 2nd level banner reduces and cleaned up. title text added to icons.
cheers - Kappa
- stupidresponse0
progressive jpegs are so 1998
- akrokdesign0
i am being picky but ex. on "rental" there is no pre. or next. so take off the buttons.
otherwise, it looks good.
- jevad0
Nice work mate - clean..very clean.
- wendog0
the type for the nav is killing me
- jonatne0
this is kindof a new thing
you should look into it
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tab…
- PonyBoy0
line up those nav separator lines w/the box holding the logo... would ya?
thanks,
Pony