One more logo crit
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- ninjasavant0
crap, I just noticed that the second one has screwed up alignment. other than that . . .
- kld0
The mark says 'sumo wrestler' to me. Is that helpful?
- ha ha, i can totally see that now.
considering what chocolate does though it may be appropriate :Dninjasavant - sumo wrestler...trueJaline
- first thing I thoughtjoqui
- ha ha, i can totally see that now.
- ukit0
Top one is too flowery for me. The flowery symbol and flowery script don't sit too well together, and it's not very readable.
Bottom one has more potential, but I would simplify it by removing the outline, getting rid of the line, getting rid of the "drip," and maybe going with a different font.
- utopian10
sumo wrestler was the first thing I saw as well
- Jaline0
The image in the logo is OK for now. Work on getting the right font and aligning everything correctly. The font doesn't seem right to me.
- Llyod0
what what
- ukit0
Also, shouldn't it be Ooh La La?
- kld0
also says wedding cake. a drip is an interesting idea and maybe more appetizing.
- epete220
those are horrible
- epete220
Repeat
Fatal Error: Those are horrible, Start over.
- utopian10
- I may owe you a beer.ninjasavant
- Better, but I still think the symbol is too confusingukit
- 1. Lucy Script, 2. Baskerville, 3. Paralucentutopian1
- nice job! better.Jaline
- The symbol grew on me, yes at first I thought "sumo" then "choc fountain" sank in...utopian1
- by the way, what does "ouh" mean?Jaline
- It supposed to be a chocolate fountain combined with a wedding cake since thats what she does the most ofninjasavant
- Jaline, I don't know. Its just what she called it.ninjasavant
- you can't polish a turdmonospaced
- kld0
Ooh is better
- 5timuli0
Logo looks like a cockroach standing on it's hind legs?
- kld0
the logo make more sense with wedding cakes but I will alway see the sumo and now cockroaches ;)
- matt310
you might want to have the sumo's feet bleed off the edge of the circle - then it might not look so much like a person. The serif font looks way better than the script as well. I might experiment with some other sans-serif options though. maybe engel light or officina - another serif that might work nice is caslon.
- jevad0
Needs more refinement. Try some classier looking typefaces - that one is way too heavy....
- invisiblechamber0
ouhlalaitsacamera
- robotron3k0
Huh La La?
- Complexfruit0
- < way better, waaaaaay.akrokdesign
- agreearseni
- +1
BannedKappa
- akrokdesign0
see above, nice idea.
font wise, you need to expend your view.
color wise also, better if you got pink and brown, not red.- agree
something like this.
http://logopond.com/…BannedKappa
- agree