Portfolio critique
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- moamoa0
Born 1987.
bravo, great photos.
website is not so good. frontpage sucks in almost every way also the protfolio and about placement.
- Andrew_D0
Awesome pics! Are some HDR?
- gentleman0
tl:dr
make links clickable?
- Llyod0
great photos and photoshop work
- magnificent_ruin0
looks good, but I do prefer being able to navigate with thumbnails or numbered buttons rather than only having the option of clicking through.
- Stian0
Thank you very much for your comments! None of the pictures are HDR by the way. Some are comped with different exposures, but not in a HDR-way.
- Fariska0
Definitely good.
Not sure about the splash page (as others pointed out needs more info, at least for google would be good)
And the arrows looks bit pixellated , but this is a very minor detail.
And as maginificent_ruin said, i'd consider having a thumbnail page as introduction for your folio and then the slideshow.
- VectorMasked0
Sweet photos.
You should definitely work with me for free ;o)
Only thoughts are:
Small text on main page looks bad. Pretty bad actually.
it does sucks big time that one needs a big monitor to enjoy the pictures. I'm on a macbook pro and the images touching both the top and bottom edges. It's hard to enjoy the images.Great work on the pix anyways.
- Stian0
Thanks for the input! Hit me up with a cool project, and I'll consider it! :)
I may be doing some minor changes to the design after reading all the good pointers I've got from you guys.
Thanks again!
- 3point141590
Overall nice and clean, nice photos, here are my comments:
• Please use another font, looks generic
• Please get rid of those ugly font arrows
• Auto center your SWF to fit in the browser
- Stian0
Thank you, 3point!
- harv0
Hey stian. Great work. But I urge you to look into the details a little greater. Your photos look beautiful, but the ones I know are compiled show. Im only writing this becuase Im building a new portfolio right now and the art directors, and clients alike will pick your work apart. Watch out for dodging on edges. And give items that are brought into the photos "LIFE". Shadows, highlights and appropriate color.
Other then those minor things mate, Im a little jealous
- Stian0
Harv: Thank you so much for the honest feedback! It´s those small things that makes good great..
3point: I´ll definately change the arrows and the font!
- harv0
Stain, what did you use to make this site. Im looking at building a new site myself and I like some of the aspects of it. Super simple and its all you need to shot the clients
- For the slideshow i used this: http://code.google.c…
The rest is css/htmlStian
- For the slideshow i used this: http://code.google.c…
- janne760
you have a lot of talent! great.
both photography and website can always use some more polishing and refining... this is what's next in life. learning about details. this learning process will last about 50 years.
goodluck!
- annaanjos0
very nice portfolio, i liked very much, congratulations!!!
:)
- dog_opus0
Great, great stuff. I really like the vintage/modernist look you're able to produce in some of those pieces.
- Iggyboo0
The work is lovely. The design intro is a bit weak if I was to critique. The type being too tightly kerned made it near impossible to want to read. The content I found a bit difficult because there was no loading sequence. But i also found it concerning there was no mark or name of the artist unless you dug for it. otherwise nice work.