portfolio crit
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- svenreed0
im not sure what its about typist.
but alexis, i do enjoy the smorgasborg! i love the boldness of it, it takes a certain personality to pull that off, and it works nicely with your work. i would also caution against the legibility of the links as well. the hierarchy seems off to me as well. for instance, why is contact the second link down? two more things ive noticed...your name or info isn't anywhere on the homepage, kind of leaves one wondering where they are..and the image quality of some of your work is rather poor. other then that i love it! especially the work itself.
- cls0
Like the installation of city sign language
- Jnr_Madison0
Burn the fucker on a stake.
- studderine0
i like it.
- typist0
alexis, i am sorry if i sound harsh, nothing personal, i expect a better portfolio from a CSM stduent. i am a creative director in an agency. i saw a few hundred of portfolio each year, like 30% is new grad. your site or work is nowhere close to "nice" to me.
in what sence you guys think she can pull off that heart foundation piece herself? if you really see the whole portfolio, it's stand out and out of the place too, but alexis admitted that only change the text of the heart when i asked.
for those who said nice work, i think you guys are giving her false hope. it's okie to be a personal site, but it won't get her a decent job in any good studio. to be honest, if you are the employee, will you employ her? now, anyone?
- acuddyre0
hi typist, thanks for your input, I asked for feedback and I'm fine with what you have said. Re: the BHF mural, as I have said, the concept was not mine but I was given the project during my placement and completed the art-working on my own. I don't think I am claiming more credit than is deserved and have cleared how the work is displayed in my portfolio with Sennep prior to uploading anything.
- Oh, you're a girly, I was just joking btw.Jnr_Madison
- don't worry, you still have time for your grad show, good luxk! : )typist
- studderine0
"get a job". if only you didnt have to. you'd be able to do interesting work all the time.
- dan53820
Honestly not bad.... However dark and there is little to no information hierarchy. Write a little about your projects, to an employer this is important. Write a little about your process as well, this was key in the last two designers i hired.
- skii0
Font smorgasborg could and should be done better. blurrrrrp