new portfolio site
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- SoulFly0
I don't think you have to put down "credits" to yourself.
- epete220
not bad but all your work looks exactly the same. 18? god damn you. good job.
- dMullins0
First impression: confused.
- magnificent_ruin0
that went well
- mg330
If I were 18 again I would do it all different, starting with doing more chicks.
- Jnr_Madison0
I didn't stumble upon anything, you posted the link.
- doesnotexist0
I opened it, said, "omg..." and then closed it.
the amount of typefaces is really an issue, and hierarchy. get a solid grid system going and clean up the type - I think that will really help it a lot. I really didn't look at the work, the site made me unable to do so.
- once he gets some agency experience he will learn. I am sure you remember those days.epete22
- tommyo0
Yup, definitely not bad considering you're 18.
Only thing I'd like to suggest is: Learn grids and typography. Spend some time honing those skills and you'll see huge improvement in your work.
Other than that, keep going man. Oh and one tiny suggestion. Maybe consider positioning yourself as 'you' and not 'you as a company.' Everyone can sense it when you're trying to be bigger than you really are.
- waterhouse0
*waits for raging teenager to return
- 3point141590
Looks like a blog template from templatemonster.com
Sorry, so busy I did not even know what to read?
- astereo0
Thanks for all the comments guys. I'll do some cleaning up and reorganizing throughout the week in between exams. Expect an update tomorrow.
And yes, my first site was a homestead WYSIWYG editor built site for my little league team. from there I've progressed and tried to improve. Obviously I still have a ways to go, but for a hobby I spend minor time on, the return has been pretty decent ;)
- I'll bump the post tomorrow sometime so I can receive updated comments and suggestions.astereo
- Anders0
Ideas: Coming very soon.
I like that. You should make it bigger. Use it as a headline or something on the front page.
- astereo0
Made a few changes here and there, including cutting down on the overuse of different fonts. Please feel free to share your thoughts so I can continue to improve.... I was find portfolio's to be one of the hardest to perfect. I don't want to be overpowering, but I want to be effective.
- D_Dot0
Same link right?
- skt0
- astereo0
thanks skt. I'm thinking about eliminating the work page and focusing simply on the homepage, leaving the work and approach pages. by the way, some really cool work in your portfolio!