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- guerrilladesign
Hey, let me know what you think.
The box with the white stroke will be a content slider of featured work with description. There won't be so much space between the body elements and the footer when finished. It's just an image as I haven't begun to code or slice it up yet as I'm looking for feedback.
- ukit0
Excellent use of negative space.
- noiseisthis0
i get this message:
404? What floor am I on again?
Go ahead and click one of the links below to get back on track.- I forgot how to spell assets for a moment and got my own url wrong.guerrilladesign
- MrDinky0
I personally dont like it. Why? I dont know, I just dont like it.
- doesnotexist0
where's the concept? looks like a template. not very inspiring either.
- Pixter0
How about trying to align at least two elements?
- ukit0
How about instead of Guerilla Design, Gorilla Design?
Just a thought.
- SteveJobs0
lose the font, the barcode, the b&w picture.
get rid of the gray bg and put the links up top
provide a better screenshot that shows a more accurate perspective
scrap the idea of having a blog.
put the text controls in your soon-to-com 'contact' section.other than that, good start.
- Josev0
Why the wavy lines at the top and bottom of the black/brown content area? It doesnt work with the (semi) constructivist concept.
- There's no alignment or relationship between any of the elements.Josev
- I thought it was an interesting contrast to the rest of the hard lines. I'm glad you caught on to the constructivist concept. Still tring to get it all to come together.guerrilladesign
- 5timuli0
FWOSTY DIPPUHS!!!
- i am following you like a hawk...apparently. oh, wait! it's just because you are posting in every thread!lvl_13
- ...so like i said, i am following you like a hawk :Dlvl_13
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- akrokdesign0
stick to the GRID! your breaking it.
- so what you are saying is that he is the neo david carson? rad.lvl_13
- GO SWISS!akrokdesign
- I don't need no stinking grid! Well really I do, but I'm I'm just working on the concept and getting all the elements in some kind of harmony before applying it all to a grid. I keep changing things so much on it to try and find something that works for me I feel if start putting in grids right now it'll make me feel all boxed in.guerrilladesign
- welded0
Your contact form doesn't have any sort of submit button.
- akrokdesign0
you don't have to use your LOGO FONT on everything.
also, that LOGO is HUUUUUUUUUUUUGE.
- Jnr_Madison0
You've really mocked it up.
- 5timuli0
I can imagine Scooby-doo doing the voice over.
Portrolio? Nyeeheeheeheeheeeheee.
- jamble0
Needs more gorillas.
- KarlFreeman0
Lose the become a facebook fan?!
- Benja820
half the amount of images & only put the best ones on.
- mydo0
I'm lost.
I'm getting the concepts, generic che guevara, russian cold war graphics, horror film rawness, with a big brother bar code. is this what your customers are looking for? I presume you are redesigning your site to attract business, consider your target market. are they looking for guerilla campaigns to shock, or clean design and professional photography services. Keep your own graphic ideals for personal pieces.just my 2 cents anyway ;)
- wristtattoo0
Rule #1 - unless you want to be slated, don't post a thing on QBN