logo feedback?
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- Stugoo
OK I'm opening myself up here for some abuse...
I've never been much of a logo designer but on a whim of inspiration I've tweaked my own logo as a work in progress :
or with the star :
Sort of thinking friendly and bubbly, and i think the letter spacing is a little off.
I considered tweaking the star version to have the tail of the 'S' come into the bottom to create a flower.... not sure...
my gf says that it looks like a 'surf shop log with chicks for free'
- NotByHand0
What is it for? (Just yourself?)
Maybe try it without the black outlines.
- Taschen0
I like the font choice and the shape it creates but it looks too cartoony from the gradient and stroke. Maybe try a flat colored version and add a scratchy texture to it. Then add a asterisk to the top right to balance it all out.
- Jnr_Madison0
I think it could work, those colours are bit too 'Cheers' for my liking tho.
- ximeraLabs0
- Ok, maybe not, lol.Jnr_Madison
- I never realised how nice this actually is.Jnr_Madison
- just thinking the same thing JnriCanHazQBN
- ximeraLabs0
I think you're heading in a nice direction... Try connecting the letters in a nice way and maybe steer clear of the 'Cheers' colours. Maybe try a fat outline around the entire word?
- neverblink0
- wow, some funky jpg artifacts on that white outlineneverblink
- no...Corvo2
- Taschen0
- like this, colors have a nice retro quality - the texture reminds me of an old sticker on luggaged_rek
- I was going for a crackly texture but didn't know how to make oneTaschen
- wtf are you texturing a logo for?????? did you do that in Photoshop?? Dear lord.iCanHazQBN
- Uhm...d_rek
- I'm liking this oneMondoMorphic
- can someone ban icanhazqbn? what trolling douche bagTaschen
- trolling? that isn't trolling. if you're texturing a logo in this manner, you need help. or some kind of design edu.iCanHazQBN
- haha, obviously you're trying to hurt my feelings, must have a chip on your shouldersTaschen
- if you never saw a texture on a logo before, you're a fucken idiotTaschen
- you're a fucken idiot either wayTaschen
- and if you're so good, let's see some of your work you pussyTaschen
- Settle down mate. You should design a logo without colours and treatments, and add these after you have something that works!Amicus
- ...something that worksAmicus
- d_rek0
I think you are getting close Stugoo! I am beginning to be sold more and more on taschen's direction than the bubbly, candy like quality of yours - but that is an entirely subjective observation.
Personally I think it works better the flatter it gets. I'm not crazy about the shiny/gradient effects, but would love to see it in a style like typist or ximeraLabs suggested.
Also, what is the significance of the asterisk? As a design element it doesn't feel out of place, i'm just curious as to it's purpose.
- kgvs720
Yellow is looking nice. I'm not sure about the white outline though.
- Taschen0
- please stay away from the design field.iCanHazQBN
- suck my diiiiiickkkkkTaschen
- I really like this one!MondoMorphic
- whats the POINT of it though? throwing some random texture on a logo.. wtf. is this for a brochure cover???iCanHazQBN
- do you honestly believe you've "helped" him? he's trying to figure out the FORM of the logo...iCanHazQBN
- apologies if i have offended. but damn, designers are so fucking brain-dead these days.iCanHazQBN
- just because you have a copy of photoshop doesn't mean you should be a designer.iCanHazQBN
- this fucking sucks, what do the splats represent?Benja82
- It was made in 30 seconds?Taschen
- And what's the difference between the stars on your logo? Same shit http://www.deepspaceā¦Taschen
- Haha. Because the fucking logo he did is DONE, in final form. Stu is asking for help with the logo, not some gay textures.dMullins
- eat a dick, i'll take on all of YOU's, RAWRRTaschen