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- imnotadesigner
Which one would you be more inclined to choose? The first, second, or third?
Its a label design for a pro sport supplement company.
- dropdown0
3
- detritus0
How do you spell 'supplement'?
I'd probably go down number 3's route.
- Though - is your client really happy with you chopping their logo in half in the background?detritus
- they love itimnotadesigner
- actually, they don't mind it at allimnotadesigner
- +funkgawz
- mydo0
wrapped around a bottle can you read BIOSTEEL clearly?
i love the name
- Projectile0
2. im thinking it's lacking a bit of a metallic look.. but is that white going to be printed or left clear? in which case I think it'll look great
- detritus0
I hope this is an early iteration - the copy and text formatting is terrible.
- locustsloth0
#2 is the winner, for me
#1 is too bright
#3 seems bottom heavy
- dadasoniko0
I say 2, but the left top corner .... looks too dark i think maybe just a little curve...
- brandelec0
#2 but isn't logo too wide for the wrap?
- its a fairly wide bottle, I did a little mock-up to see and its okimnotadesigner
- dopebrandelec
- jimzy0
2 or 3
- Projectile0
the logo should have a B in it for the "bio" part. "BS" << like that.
- thought of that already when they told me the nameimnotadesigner
- janne760
#1 or 3
but for the tagline..
this could use a lot more research where to position it in the market.
for now it looks rather bland, stale, nothing i would notice that well inbetween competitors products.
- capn_ron0
I bet this will sound cheesy, but is there a budget to foil the logo or something different in the printing? The name biosteel is perfect for some type of printing treatment.
- that'd be cool... would have to do some good persuading on my part thoughimnotadesigner
- johndiggity0
stay away from the all red
- bastards!imnotadesigner
- what a shite logo btwimnotadesigner
- though to be fair, it's considerably better than yoursraskolnikov
- <version3
- ideaist0
Gotta see it wrapped in context but #2 is best as it hides the logo in the watermark where as the other 2 look double branded... Good hustle!
- MSL0
3.
Niggles: Indent the line which wraps on the bullets (2nd para right column) and loose the hyphenation on the 3rd para right column.
- Thesocialgospel0
I would say number 1, if the color was better. that gradient shit never ever looks good.
- adamm0
3 but I would add a yellow somewhere maybe to the tag
- dMullins0
3 is the winner, but number 2 feels more balanced to me.
- 74LEO0
You know the market better than us. I have been in GNC and they are all red now. MY eye went right towards the red. Not a good choice but if that is where the market is leaning you could try a color that would really stick out amongst all the red brands on the shelf. I like #3 because the bleeding logo directs my eye to the brand and the other text is a quick read considering it is white on a red background. I would have some people read the text and see if their eyes start to burn or water.
Not a joke. All the best.- Yah, but with a printed copy of course. On-screen won't tell you anything. Good points, 74LEO.dMullins
- jnnbugg0
3