be gentle pls...
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- vincekwok
Hey guys, new to QBN, I'm taking a huge leap here and posting up my beta portfolio for critique...
Work in progress...but some professional feedback will be great...thx in advance!
- dskz0
i like it, but i would go right to the portfolio, you dont need that intro character there.... tight wrk tho
- ok_not_ok0
networkin' logos are too big, that old mac animation is kinda cheesy (IMO) but all in all very tight portfolio.
- And it says "REPLY AD" instead of "REPLAY AD" when it's done.duckofrubber
- Sinov0
noooooooo its a Creative with a K. Doooode, unless Kreative is how you spell Creative in your language please change it to how its meant to be. Also reversed K is a typographic murder + have a closer look at your kerning, i know its meant to be tight but some are tighter than others. Sorry to give you such a bad feedback but i just cant stop looking at that reversed K thats meant to be C.
- vincekwok0
Thanks everyone for the quick reply...keep the comments coming...
- fresnobob0
The second design rule is: "Line shit up." Might help...
- FredMcWoozy0
more space?
your work seems to be better thought out then your site.
- dMullins0
I liked pieces of most of the work, but something about the presentation of it all left a bad taste in my mouth.
I think it could stand to be cleaned up a bit. Email me for more specific critique if you want—I'm leaving the office, and by tomorrow this thread will be buried under pr0n and ZOMG Twitter is Down!!11//1?!? threads.
- Definitely would like to hear your feedback...thxvincekwok
- JackRyan0
"That's What She Said."™
- ninjasavant0
I dislike how the lightbox keeps resizing so I can't scroll through stuff. I gotta move my mouse to get to the nav each time.
- mikotondria30
in the BLOG - Click Now, page turn thing, when you made the button, you rotated the text before your rendered the text layer... Photoshop behaves badly in this situation. Render the text layer THEN rotate it, then its just a bitmap and a dozen different routines don't fight each other trying to calculate the spacing etc.
- Knuckleberry0
I dont like it. Im sorry, seems like there is to much going on... get more to the point:
• go straight to the portfolio
• make your "networking" icons way smaller
• not sure why you need a "recent stuff" cetegory
• why do you have a js lightbox for your photos but the portfolio shows within your site?I hope this helps. Keep going its a start.
-Joshua
- Milan0
the homepage looks too busy and unorganized, I think it needs more hierarchy. I'd make the networking icons smaller and maybe grayscale. I'd put a border around the 3d character, since that's what you're doing on all the other pages.
- i'm a developer BTW, so take this with a grain of riceMilan
- ukit0
Clearly your automatic web updater is broken. I'd strongly encourage you to update from the 2.0 version, as it may present security risks.
- NotByHand0
Somehow this thread-title immediately threw my thoughts back to the summer of '87... in my friend Peter's parent's bedroom... being semi-tanked on Pisang Ambon... with this cute little blonde named Louise.