Logo thoughts?
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- swollenelbow
Thanks guys, just the facts! =)
http://grab.by/7tsv
- SoulFly0
too safe...
make it pop
- ksv1230
if you connect the se, you need to connect some others. just seems strange to only have the se connected
- the font is not too good, there's nothing else that can connect very wellSoulFly
- You're right!swollenelbow
- bjladams0
the letters don't seem to fit well- some are smooth and others are too sharp.
- bjladams0
i read your website name as hell_on_ice_design
that has nothing to do with anything here though....
- SoulFly0
the red bands top and bottom need to be removed, if they are meant to be part of the logo, they are not being useful.
- swollenelbow0
Does the business card design help? haha http://grab.by/7tu3
- swollenelbow0
Hell is on ice! Thank you guys for being around and whipping people like me into shape.
- horton0
unnecessary "se" connect. looks silly. no purpose. just remove it completely.
- fiver0
keep the negative area on the front and the back of the cards consistent.
- Can you explain?swollenelbow
- one is longer than the other.crayz
- dbloc0
the se look awkward
- questine0
you call this design? looks like an average template.
look at contemporary design, get inspired man.
- monNom0
idea first. then worry about application.
it looks like you skipped step 1
- formula0
um, this is pretty dated and pretty generic. instantly forgettable at best.
- orrinward0
Very forgettable. Also, watch your kerning. Why is the second n excluded from the group?
- Mr_Right0
I feel asleep a little looking at it.
- Projectile0
go get some inspiration, and rethink it.
- 74LEO0
se - needs some cleanup where they join.
What did the original line up look like?
Is this a final of 3 to 5 variations that they picked?
- umbee540
maybe try "actionable...infrastructure" in caps and kern the letters to give them a little spacing. i think servnation is approachable with the lowercase. caps on the bottom will balance it out... in my opinion
- i_monk0
I don't get the SE ligature at all.
It's really dull.