Logo feedback needed
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- dbloc0
- if every logo in turkey was based on turkey then well turkey would be v.turkishfadein11
- mmm turkeydbloc
- islamic architectural element?doesnotexist
- dbloc0
this could help too.
https://www.google.com/search?q=…
- i_monk0
Clowns must stop.
- monospaced0
Like but needs refinement. There could be a narrower gap between the ends of the rounds strokes where the fingers and jawline meet. Also consider making the finger length differences slightly less obvious. Let's also see the one-color versions, and how it might work on other backgrounds, just in case.
- set0
I like the hand a lot. Don't think it works with the dot, might look better bigger.
- MrT0
I like it, what about a shorter smile so it's more implied/less literal? And I reckon it's almost less hand-like in the last one above...
- Projectile0
I think it's great. You've done reaaly well here.
I just think it could be a little bigger in some instances
- albums0
I think maybe the ring and index finger should be equal to make it sexless.
- albums0
why doesn't the palm come up to meet the pinky?
why isn't the dot the same circumference as the stroke width?
the hand is that of a man.- diameter not circumference :/albums
- i think you mean to say radiusx2.Projectile
- Beeswax0
- i'm likeyutopian
- this, with the nose, but the nose should be the same size as the strokes... and it looks a bit liks a clown if that's okaymonNom
- maybe more space between fingers, slight outward curve on thumb?monNom
- Wilson! I would avoid a round nose if you want to avoid the clown reference.ORAZAL
- Talk to the handstewart
- freedom0
Make sure it works small.
- cannonball19780
Also, if I were your designer, I would veer away from the typographic "O" treatment and go for something with a bit more political clout, considering what your organization is engaged in.
Perhaps a column, or a flame, or an amphitheater. Or maybe something the common man can understand and where his voice lives, such as a town square.
- yeah, I need to find objective symbols like that.Beeswax
- cannonball19780
In all honesty, I would focus on boiling down your values a little more. If you put them out there like that, it strikes me that you want use them as a tool for communication.
While I applaud your values, a list 12 words long is not memorable, nor are the values you listed. I would find some distinct and unique words that interlink or encompass one or more of them that make them distinct. Something like "humanist" or "ethical" or "accountable" that feel more like they describe a tangible aspect of something and can be put together in a mission statement—raise more of a flag of a certain color, instead of the "we are good" flag, if you catch my meaning.
- You're right. It is long. We had hot debates over this. It shouldn't be more than 5 values in my opinion.Beeswax
- All those values could be tucked under participatory democracy. http://en.wikipedia.…Beeswax
- pick 3doesnotexist