SHA! Logo Critique
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- wagshaft0
Awesome letter shapes.
The "A" isn't reading. How about including the bar like in the "H"?
- dopepope0
I agree. It's quite nice, but the A needs that bar.
- iCanHazQBN0
I would have never guessed that it reads SHA.
It's completely illegible. It could read anything... JHR JHA JHN SHN SHR CHA CHR CHN
- haha fair enough, totally agree. but then, i don't want to make it easy for people either.prophetone
- ukit20
I like it. What is it for?
- my ios video game branding. at least for the initial just get things going stages.prophetone
- Nice, the logo reminds me a bit of TDRukit2
- prophetone0
Well... to me it's 'balanced as far as peaks and the S and the A mirroring each other a bit.
Was going to break out each letter but was way too clunky. So the S and the H share common shapes. Altho the S bothers me a bit but I think I'm backed into a corner with that.
The A is another thing, if I throw a box in there to make it a proper A it looks forced to me, just a little dot for the a-hole. If I place it at bottom it winds up as a P. I kinda like the A as is - kinda futuristic? - but I dunno...
Clearly I'm overthinking this lol.
- pinkfloyd0
Good start, second line seems too spaced out for me.
- yeah and maybe not heavy enough ala font weight. bugging me too.prophetone
- raf0
I like it a lot, but it reads JHN.
- dyspl0
love it.
just sort the A and it's a win.
- prophetone0
I might take another crack tonight to see if I wind up with something slightly different. But I like this for now I think; sharp, clean. And also I hate it, haha.
I was also thinking about doing something with my Krink K-51 markers and scanning that, maybe with the above logo shapes but all drippy and organic. And by messing around, could wind up with a cool mistake to work with.
- prophetone0
Thanks for the feedback gents, appreciated!
- Fax_Benson0
looks cool but agree it's hard to scan. Could you disconnect the top left of the H so that the S is formed better? Might not work.
- organicgrid0
- I think separation between the 's' and the 'h' would also help with legibility. Looks cool though.summs
- Yeah... would want the lower line to match that in the H hence my pickleprophetone
- but will mess around some moreprophetone
- Reads better but doesn't look as good
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- Krassy0
it's cool!
- dbloc0
JHA or UHA to me
- iCanHazQBN0
The S is definitely the hardest to read. I'd separate it from the H. It would actually make more sense to separate it, as the H and A are not connected, and it would be more consistent if NONE were connected.
Also add the white space as per organicgrid's suggestion.
- sem0
I love this, esp the colour!
- JG_LB0
jha!
- omahadesigns0
JHr
- dragonfruit0
this made me Login for the first time in a while. Best logo I ve seen in years.
Keep the 1st version. Legibility doesnt matter, its about its memorable.
I will prob copy it tho