Critique Please
Critique Please
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No. 1. Alternate rendering adds strong detailing (the devil is in the details!). Understates the cross, but likely that all the contexts it will be in will have some spiritual/church reference (full name, etc.)
Only criticism there is to explore the typography to lock-up with it further. The serif you're using makes it a bit stodgy. In addition, you're only weaking the graphic strength of the mark by placing it in a containing shape.
Good work on that first version! Don't present anything else to the client - go with one, strong recommendation and you'll win it.