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- gramme
Logo for my church. The name is Twin Oaks Presbyterian Church. We're fairly traditional, suburban but with a growing number of young people like myself.
http://metagramme.com/TOPC_MS_pr…
cheers,
gramme
- capsize0
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- I like the spilt "T" and the trinity of leaves where there ought be roots but when Icapsize
- eh?gramme
- look at it I see bull with horns, two nostrils and a tongue.capsize
- i never would've seen that...not sure I agree, but interesting thoughtgramme
- I like 7 brings together crucifix, double and the letter t with a solemn simplicity.capsize
- w/ a celtic echocapsize
- page 7 = 1Ecapsize
- harlequino0
Try getting the name changed to Twin Peaks Presbyterian Church. You'll attract a certain fan base.
- gramme0
*there appears to be some funny artifacting going on in a few pages, it disappears when you zoom in (stupid PDFs...)
- kalkal0
Some nice ones in there. Others don't seem very relevant to a church. My pick is 2D
- dskz0
just make sure it looks like a church and not a hotel logo
- 7point340
i like 2f
some of the others look a little too hotel for me. (especially the leaves in the latter concepts
- fyoucher10
Niice work. I like 1E the best but they're all good.
- detritus0
1e & 2c are both floating my heathen boat.
I'm very much a traditionalist in my expectations of church branding and media though - I can't get my head around the many FRESSH and POP Christian things I've seen here over the years.
- Jaline0
1E
2G
3B5 is too pretty for a church.
- organic_grid0
1a.
- neue75_bold0
1E...
some of others feel too precious/pretentious, ala Saks... don't get me wrong, it's good stuff, just not right..
Maintain a pious and humble posture and the path will open itself upon you my sweet child...
- 7point340
ps. very nice
- YAYPaul0
4 feels a little too much like the Wordpress logo.
5 doesn't feel very 'churchy'. If you get what i mean.
I like 1 and 2 a lot. I'm going to say 1 though.
2 has a cross and while i'm not against crosses i feel 1 may attract more young adults. Personally i'm not religious, but if i was i'd like a logo that personified my church not 'the' church in general.I hope that made sense.
- Dr_Rand0
I like the tri-root/T, but wish the T was lowercase/cross (but without the O aspect)
- Faction180
1 alternate is by far the strongest
- whatsup0
what for does a church need to consider itself a need to brand? I thought it was forbidden according to the bible to worship icons. It's like rebranding jesus or the judiast religion to suit one's needs
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- sleepyfatso0
Defo the first logo, but maybe try a lower case t to see if it can work as well.
- Complexfruit0
1E
1A
Looking good gramme nice work.- I agree with the comments about 5, it doesn't seem like the right fit for a church.Complexfruit
- organic_grid0
Gramme overall beautiful work!
#1 - is the strongest, and most forward thinking mark of the group. It is unique, sophisticated, meaningful and will be well received by younger generation of worshippers.
#2 & 3 - looks old and dated, cliche, just about every church in America uses some sort of variation of the crucifix/cross, pretty boring.
#4 - boring
#5 - Remindful of the Frito Lays brand and or a real estate development company or community.
#6 - Looks like a vacation or retreat destination
- jysta0
1C or 1E (difficult to choose)
2C
3C
4B
5CGreat work btw/