SkateT design crit
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- tymeframe
http://www.metroskate.com/ShirtD…
This is will be a shirt for our local skate magazine. I'm only going with one design and trying to choose which one.
placed on center chest...
constructive crits please...
- Neuarmy0
#2
- non0
Please refrain from using those fonts again, all of them.
- non0
I'd say #2, but drop the dragons and the sketchy gray scorpion legs in the background. You should also try placing the thunderbolts and the ink spots in different ways. Get rid of the dotted line, or make it thinner and play with the gap and stroke length.
- RevoltOne0
#1 is pretty good...I like the cityscape...maybe some fine tuning .....then roll wit it.
- nick0
i like #3 the best.
change the typeface of metroskate.com though...
- tymeframe0
thanks for the replies so far.
the city scape with the fonts became our logo, so I was building around that.
- abstrakt0
if you changed #3 to maybe a pigeon or a squirrel it would be better. #2 has nothign to do with a city. #1 is OK...
- imakedesign0
work on 3
- nRIK0
#1 filled
- brooke0
I would have to say that none of these designs are very solid. The imagery is fairly weak & the logo needs a lot of work.
I'd recommend doing some more brainstorming & planning for a more solid concept & execution.
- chossy0
I like 3 but I do not like the writting. Is the fonts etc. final?.
- bombsoda0
please change the fonts, less font would be better, 3 is the best i guess, maybe working on the tree (i mean a bigger one and reduce the logo) the tree is great if you use it in a better way.
- 2cent0
i'm with brooke... they all look weak.
keep it simple, way too much going on there and those fonts are hideous.
- JG_LB0
this isn't for a fortune 500 corp. it's for skateboarders.... fonts are terrible but i like symmetry so work with #1. shy away from the bumble bee look to no?
- zenfulbeauty0
What about reversing the colors for the cityscape and lettering in #3?
- dbloc0
JG_LB
"this isn't for a fortune 500 corp. it's for skateboarders...."what is that suppose to mean??? skaters don't care what it looks like.
They are probably more critical than a fortune 500 company.
- zenfulbeauty0
I'll get a 15 year old skateboarders opinion in just a bit for ya. :)
- dbloc0
I say brainstorm some more ideas.
The first concepts aren't always the winners. sometimes it takes a while, If it's going to be the image of your company/website you should take your time with it. Work with different colors and logo ideas.
- grafholic0
i liked #3 but use different font and maybe apply some black in that owl.
- contia10
i'm not knocking any one's opinion so i don't want it to come off that way, but what is it about number 3 that everyone likes?
seems immature and elementary to me, can someone change my mind?