SkateT design crit
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- contia10
oh and i prefer number two, other than the fact that i lose the city scape, hard to decipher that's what it is, blends in with background noise.
- JG_LB0
being a skateboarder/skateboard filmer myself as well as designer i don't see any reason to meticulously go into detail about the design.
K.I.S.S
- blackspade0
looks like a bad alien workshop to me
- magicpatch0
too many conflicting shapes, weights, and ratios. have a look at this stuff: make it simpler
http://universaleverything.com/r…
- thompson0
rethink those typefaces.
- zenfulbeauty0
For what its worth:
the 15 year old skater liked #3 the best and thought the others had too much going on.
- tparsons0
All of those need a rework from the ground up including the logo.
It looks like you're trying to hard to use "cool" images and symbols that just don't work well together.
- rasp0
all i can say is.. who do you think will wear this? thats not meant to be a put down, but a consrutctive thought.
I doubt many people would wear this at all as it stands now.
theres no way many people would choose this over other designs.
do some research and put more thought into what you are trying to achieve.
get some solid ideas, find some inspiration in some things YOU find good/cool and then try to work your design up.
- tymeframe0
thanks for the crits....I'll try some tweaking. The logo is really rough. Probably was a bad decision to "just go with it".
I was pressed for time to get some shirt art done, but I think I have another week now. I'll post the results then.
- forcetwelve0
tell me you're not using Skia in there somewhere?
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concept is kinda there - just look at that logo lock-up, it's too airy to me...
- dbloc0
i like the cityscaped filles in with the image on your intro animation:
looks better than the solid yellow color and breaks it up a little.