logo critique?
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- creative-0
The antithesis of what you have done wold be a serif font and all the words spelt out fully. Maybe give that ago?
- graham0
uninspired
- fodcj0
Appreciate the comments Letters2. Is to the point and not harsh, but constructive criticism which I am always happy to hear.
- Spookytim0
On a side note though, when I see the word 'critique' I always think of the game petanque which is really excellent and makes me feel good, so well done on that point.
Now, back to this gosh-darned logo....
- Randd0
I once submitted something for a crit and had to be talked down off a roof
- Randd0
the cleaning lady didn't like the colors you used because they don't match the drapes--could you change them?
- Knuckleberry0
I read:
are uninspired
at first glance, bad times
- fodcj0
Have you seen the second set of designs? Look at page 2
- vwsung18t0
the dots for the i looks weird without the rest of the bulb. how about wrapping the U in the bulb icon from the first set of logos to separate it from the rest of the text.
- note sure I get what you mean?fodcj
- like this but not hand drawn www.backfrog.com/nt...vwsung18t
- marychain0
ian has had the best suggestion so far
The only way to get it to NOT read uninspired is to give it some distance http://www.are-you-inspired.com/…...
or spell out the "YOU"
and a more inspiring typeface is needed
We're trying to help....not be mean...I'm not sure that comes across sometimes
- fodcj0
Any more for any more?
- design_naked0
I just shot you an email with a few comps I threw together...maybe they inspire or maybe they don't...but I'm a bit bored today trying to wrap up some IA work (fun fun) so I thought I would try and help. Don't have anywhere to post the image to so that's why I emailed it over.
- Didn't get your email design_naked. Just sent you one so if you got that please send again. Cheers for the helpfodcj
- Jeremyhead0
uninspired
- fodcj0
Didn't get your email design_naked. Just sent you one so if you got that please send again. Cheers for the help
- fodcj0
Got It!
- design_naked0
Cool, like I said, nothing spectacular...threw it together quickly...but maybe it helps.
- 7340
different color seems to help separate it. i also thought about making it 2 lines like design naked did... to physically separate...
finally someone did the light bulb as a question mark